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Internet Writing
Workshops-
or, I Romance a Mailing List…
27
April 1999
Written
for CBC Ottawa's
Radio Show, CBO Morning
Back in 1992,
I decided to do something constructive with my daydreams, and
so I started romance writing. I outlined a novel called A Rose
By Any Other Name and promptly threw together three chapters featuring
a thinly disguised version of myself as the heroine, who winds
up in a battle of wits with a tall, handsome and intriguing Jazz
pianist. (Sigh! Why don’t these guys exist in real life?) Then,
alas, my exams came up, and I ever-so-conveniently forgot about
my desire to be the next Danielle Steel.
I finally dusted off my two chapters in 1997, and took a look.
They weren’t that bad, and the story did have potential. And I
sure wanted to see my heroine get together with the guy, if only
for my own satisfaction. But I was going to need motivation to
get it done. Surprisingly, I found that motivation through the
Internet-- I’ve been part of a mailing list by the name of “Lovestory”
for almost two years now.
“Lovestory” is part of the Internet Writing Workshop, which exists
as an independent forum in which members can share and critique
their literary work. A general page of information about joining
the Internet Writing Workshop can be found at http://www.geocities.com/~lkraus/workshop/index.html
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The writing workshop itself encompasses a number of different
literary genres-from poetry, to teen writing, to novels, scripts,
and, of course, romance. Each one of these categories has a separate
Internet e-mail list associated with it. These mailing lists are
the heart of the workshop- members exclusively use e-mail to submit
their stories and critique the work of their colleagues in the
workshop. When you join the Internet Writing Workshop, you are
automatically subscribed to a general mailing list, and then you
choose what other lists you want to be part of-and you can choose
as many lists as you like!
The main premise
of the Internet Writing Workshop is to give writers a chance to
share their works in progress and also support each other. Writing
can be a lonely, isolating experience, and it really helps to
know that there are other people out there, banging their heads
on the keyboards as well. It’s also great to know people who work
within your specific genre. I’ve been part of face-to-face writing
groups before, and they’re good as well, but the nice thing about
Lovestory is that everyone there writes romance, and, in fact,
a number of participants also write for my specific subgenre-romantic
comedy targeted at Harlequin’s “Love and Laughter” line.
Participation
is mandatory in the Internet Writing Workshop, and this is a good
thing. Each individual list has its own participation requirements,
but you are generally expected to make at least one submission
a month. This requirement actually works to my personal advantage-
the external motivation of a monthly deadline means that I’ve
had to become more organized about finding the time and the energy
for writing. And when you’re a lazy girl who would rather spend
all her free moments on the couch reading novels, this really
helps.
I don’t know
the specific details of all the mailing lists, but I’ll tell you
how Lovestory works. There are generally about thirty members
participating at any given time, and we are expected to make at
least one submission and do two critiques per month. A submission
can be just about anything--- a query letter, a short story, a
plot synopsis, or a chapter of a novel. To make a submission,
all you have to do is send your chapter (or whatever) as an e-mail
message to the entire group, using “SUB” as the subject line heading.
When the group gets your submission, members can choose to critique
it.
To critique
a submission, you reply to the entire group using “CRIT” as the
subject line heading, and include some of the text of the submission
that you are critiquing. Generally, when I do a crit, I will first
write a paragraph about my general perceptions of the piece, and
what I did and didn’t like. The rest of the message will be my
line-edit of the submission, pointing out specific areas in the
text that need polishing. It’s fun to get the submissions as well.
Most of the subs on Lovestory are chapters of novels that people
are working on, and you get involved with the characters and the
story, and wind up eagerly awaiting your monthly update. And,
I’ve found that a majority of the submissions that I receive are
well-written and professional, just in need of a little bit of
polishing.
The great
thing about this system is that when you make a submission, you
are just about guaranteed to get at least three crits back. The
crits are, for the most part, very constructive and useful ---
I can’t tell you how many times a “critter” has picked up my grammar
mistakes, or been able to pinpoint the solution to the problem
I was having with character motivation. (I sometimes have problems
writing my male lead, thanks to my general misunderstanding of
the male species!)
The other
good thing about the crits that you get from the Internet Writing
Workshop is that they tend to be unbiased. Submitting a piece
over a mailing list is much different from getting your mother
to read your latest literary attempt-Mom’s going to think it’s
great no matter what. But the mailing list has a nice feeling
of distance- and chances are your writing workshop colleagues
will be able to find the glitches that your friends and family
overlook. In fact, the criticism that I get from the mailing list
is very constructive, and it really prepares me for what a “real
editor” might make of my work.
In addition
to sharing critiques and submissions, the Internet Writing Workshop
mailing lists are also a good source of market information and
advice. If you have a question about a specific publishing company,
or need writing tips, posting to the list with your queries really
helps. My colleagues on the lovestory list quite often talk about
the latest writing and romance writing sites on the internet,
and through them, I’ve managed to find a number of great resources.
Plus, your friends on the writing workshop really help you out.
We’ve all been through periods of what I call “writers doubt”,
and it makes a difference to have a community out there, who is
waiting for your next submission, and truly interesting in what
you’re writing.
At any rate,
I must say that there is a good chance that “A Rose By Any Other
Name” might still be filed away in a desk drawer someplace if
it wasn’t for the Internet Writing Workshop. Instead, I’m halfway
through chapter eight, and for a notorious procrastinator like
me, that’s progress. However, there is that little matter of getting
the main characters to live happily ever after…
for more information:
General Information
on the Internet Writing Workshop:
http://www.geocities.com/~lkraus/workshop/index.html
Inkspot,
a great site for writers’ information on the web:
http://www.inkspot.com
A great starting
point for romance writing and reading, Romantic Times Magazine:
http://www.romantictimes.com
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